It has arrived!! Click the above link to watch it on Youtube.
I finished Episode 1 and am in the process of Episode 2. Please let me know what you think. Good and bad, I can't make it better without some input! ^_^
***Things you may find wrong with the video are as follows:
Sometimes the timing might be quick when you are trying to read. Sienna decided to show her molded plastic panties in one picture, and there is a blurry picture of Nahla. However, this is just the start and I will improve over time. Plus a NEW CAMERA is on the way!! SO excited!!
Thank you for stopping in and sorry it took longer than expected! I have been SUPER busy with re-rooting lately.
-A Doll Affinity (Cat)
I really liked the background music you used for the video. The dialogue will be more readable if it comes in from the right and moves across the screen to the left. This way people will see the first words and be able to read them as the rest of the words are coming in. Having the dialogue drop down from the top of the screen covers part of the images and distracts viewers.
ReplyDeleteThe title cards where you provide exposition of the story need to stay up much longer so people have time to read them.
Also web videos are most effective if they are 3 minutes or less. Since your story is a serial any way, keeping the episodes shorter allows you to post new ones more frequently without having to kill yourself shooting and editing.
Looking forward to the next episode.
Thank you for all of your support and all of your VERY VERY helpful constructive tips! I tried to make use of them in Episode 2 and will continue to do so throughout! I hope you enjoy Episode 2. Again, thank you so much!!
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